Edit paragraphs

On your second read, look at each paragraph in turn. First, look at your introduction and ask:

• Is my argument clear?
• Does it answer the essay question?
• Have I included any necessary background information?

Then, look at the body of the essay and ask:

• Is each paragraph about one idea?
• Does each paragraph have a topic sentence describing the point of that paragraph?
• Is there at least one clear example in each paragraph?
• Do examples relate to the point they're meant to illustrate?
• Do I explain each example and link to the next paragraph?
• Have I used a variety of sources?
• Do paragraphs fit together in a way that makes sense?
• Does every paragraph add to, and relate back to, my argument?

Finally, look at your conclusion and ask:

• Does it summarise the key points in my essay?
• Does it link back to the introduction?
• Does it drive home my argument?
• Have I made sure there are no new ideas in my conclusion?